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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:26 pm

Hehe, thank you. I thought it was nice, for being spontaneous.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:29 pm

SHANES ONLINE!!!!! AND ITS NOT SCHOOL!!!!

so this isnt spam....

Keep up the good poetry bud.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:26 am

Freedom

With wings wide open,
Under the blood red sky,
I jump into space,
And begin to fly.

The wind beneath my wings,
Lifting me up,
Slowly I rise,
My wings going Thump.

A glorious breeze,
A glorious sight,
It all comes together,
As day turns to night.

I turn around slow,
Back to home,
For now I have one,
And it's my palace dome.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:29 am

LOL Nice! Made me think of a bird! Well, an eagle, actually. XD I like it, Shane. Meaning is soo clear and love the imagery (well, to me) lol
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:35 am

Thank you. ^_^

Personally, I was thinking of a hawk over eagle when I threw that together 10 min ago or so.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:39 am

Hahaha it's amazing when you're soo inspired and full of emotions and the only thing you wanna do is to let people know what you're feeling through poems. It's great. lol ANd yeah, I like it this big. ;)
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:43 am

Lol. I just come up with stuff randomly. It comes to me, like with Keith (kinda), but it comes to me more often.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:47 am

*ahem* I think you you forget I write poems as well... lol
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:47 am

Yes, but I don't think you come up with them in the ways that Keith and I do.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:49 am

Well, explain then...
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:50 am

That is not possible, because it involves information I'm not allowed to just go talk about, I think. And I don't really want people know how I come up with my poems.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:55 am

-_- Yea, yeah... you and Keith are lovers anywayz. X_X
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:58 am

That would be creepy. You know why I wont reveal some things already. -_-

Flame Burst

A burst of fire,
In the night sky,
Blares bright,
Way up high.

It sputters and bursts,
And slowly burns
Out against the stars,
And then we turn.

A burst of blue flame,
A burst of white,
A burst of red and yellow and orange,
Makes the sky alight.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:11 am

And that is fire!!! LOL Good poem too. Thats all I can say, really...
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:14 am

Lol, that's all you can comment on?

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:17 am

Actually, I'm thinking of stars being born (first stanza)...it failed (middle) then rises up again.. (last stanza)
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:20 am

Eh, I was looking more at multiple explosions that occur in the last, and the middle was just the beginning.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:21 am

Well, it's MY interpretation so...
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:21 pm

Two great poems there shane, the untitled one though, it kinda reminds me of when a bird finally get the aibilty to fly, like it gains all the freedom in the world and is bound by almost nothing except his home. I actually think freedom might not be such a bad name for it.

The second one is great, I too thought of a stars life just as GG did.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:27 pm

Yeah, I think I agree with what you said for the first one. Freedom it is titled.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:53 pm

I didn't know that you write!! you are really good!
specially your poem ''Freedom'' is my favorite! ;)


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:06 am

Hehe, yeah I write. I write a lot, actually. ^_^

Glad you liked them. And I think Freedom is one of my best ones, personally.

AGain, thanks. ^_^

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:40 am

Stand Up

A building lost in time,
A world lost in rhyme,
Nothing found,
Everything bound.

You listen hard,
Feel sharp shards,
And now you know,
How life can blow.

You can take a stand,
And raise your hand,
And start to think,
And make the link.

What would you choose,
If you had the choice,
Would you decide
To use your voice?

Or would you fall,
Deep down, lawl,
And take it
Bit by bit?

I say you shouldn't,
I say you stand,
I say your get up,
And raise that hand.

Life throws your curve balls,
But it's time to keep walking those halls.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:33 am

Good! Like the lenght, theme and rhyme. It's also a good thing that the poem is 'being' optimistic.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:01 am

Hahahaha, only optimistic if you look at it on the whole grand scale of things. :D

Glad you liked it.

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