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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:43 am

So, Keith and I came up with this in gmail chat. He put it up first, since he's the one who copied and pasted and such it into it. Enjoy.



Fight of the shadows

Shane: into the darkness we march
Keith: the hidden shadows to end
Shane: and into the light the men
Keith: the side of light and the side of shadow
Shane: where the land was split and rent
Keith: and the fires and rains come forth
Shane: unto those unworthy of entrance
Keith: the men they lined, the shadows they judged
Shane: and the light sat and waited
Keith: while the shades the would be baited
Shane: and the men waited and waited
Keith: for the shadow's first move
Shane: would be to draw steel
Keith: but no steel was drawn
Shane: for this was when the light
Keith: did not need weapons of steel
Shane: but rather would use
Keith: the powers given to them
Shane: that were bestowed by the One
Keith: the leader of old
Shane: who was most powerful
Keith: in both the light and the dark
Shane: and felt towards those in need
Keith: but when the dark made its move
Shane: the light was caught off guard
Keith: but two strong heroes
Shane: were swift in action and strong in heart
Keith: with light as their guide, and bonds deeper than brothers
Shane: the two were joined by another
Keith: the third was turned from dark
Shane: by one of the brothers bold
Keith: the youngest of the three, C he be
Shane: while the other light man, w, was the middle and
Keith: t the newest of the three fighting together against the dark
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Shane: was strong in body
Keith: and strong in mind
Shane: and thus the three stood their ground
Keith: against so many that opposed
Shane: yet they never waivered, they never left their post
Keith: felling many foes
Shane: with blade and might
Keith: with mind and light
Shane: the trio fought and in eventually
Keith: losing only the leader
Shane: they managed to destroy the shadows facing the humans
Keith: allowing the light, to shine through ruling the world once more

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:47 am

O_O OMG WOW.... that poem is awesomerz! I love it. Best thing is that, you two came up with the theme together. :D
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:49 am

Thanks GG, I actually think that we come up with some good stuff together, we shoudl do another one somtime lol
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:56 am

I agree, as I said in the other thread before I made it over to this one again, hahaha. We're totally going to work together more often.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:36 pm

Christina

the wind between the trees
reminds me of thee
upon a sunset sky
I see your eyes
the whole of nature
fills me with love
and it's all for you
'cause your my dove

(might make this into a longer poem, btw)

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:55 pm

*untitled*

I see why,
When I look in your eyes.
I see why,
When I see you smile.
I see why,
When I hear your laugh.
I see why,
When we talk.
All you do,
Is why I like you.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Apr 28, 2011 9:29 pm

As I have already told you these poems are really good.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:26 am

Reborn

Falling unto the dark,
Through the blissful wind,
Nature filling my senses,
I rise above the din.

Look upon the dark,
See the little lights,
It's hard to see them,
When it's not night.

You have to feel the dark,
Before you feel the light,
That's how it has to be
To reach past the night.

Now I open my wings,
And fly through the dark,
And into the light,
And open my heart.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Apr 29, 2011 3:27 pm

That poem has a really good meaning behind it, I can see someone being reborn almost, and it reminds me of something that happened long ago.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:17 pm

It should, actually, because it kinda is. And yeah, it is a person being reborn.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:47 am

Insanity

When all seems lost
And all seems dead
Come to me
With your head

I call to thee
I sing your name
Bring me heaven
And my bane

Listen closely
To my song
For this is now
The Death Gong

Creep and crawl
Through the night
There is nothing
Left to fight

The dark is closing
In on me
But this is nothing
I can see

The walls are shutting
On themselves
And now I fall
On egg shells

The shattering
Of the night
Can only mean
Nothing bright

For here I am
Lost in hell
Calling out
Like my bell

Listen to me
Singing now
Listen to me
I'll tell you how

To evade and lose
The darkness nigh
For this is how
We all die

Death and life
They are near
Death and life
I hold dear

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:21 pm

That is a very good poem, just like all of your other ones. Smile
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