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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:40 am

This day is just...





Silence...what keeps the moon and the stars glow,
watering such tranquility to two beings
with love as solid and hard as a diamond
found in the deepest part of melting lava.

Silence...a deep, lurking shadow that tries to lure...
With that being on the edge of sanity.

Such power silence can be as uplifting for evils heart.
For with every brush onto you, or me
could kill even the tiniest bit of a mighty angels wings.
For here is this being,
through such longing and that absence is what is unbearable,
is weak and frightened
as someone approaching his own cage of torture
and that seeks death eventually.








I actually don't know what I had just put. My mind is getting blank with all this waiting... Had to find a way, as always..

EDIT: Sorry for being so disheartened for these past few days... D: If anyone cares.. >.>


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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:12 am

Hmm... this is very interesting. I was thinking of something parallel just yesterday, and you have brought it all back by this. I must commend your thoughts, Giorgia. I won't say anything else much, because reading and understanding in... silence... is much better, no? Smile

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:53 am

LOL Agreed aye? And I didn't know you posted. >.>

Anyway, update?


I'm bored


With what I have is what you have
with what I see is what you see
when nothing comes to me
all I see is you within me.


Randoms -_-


For every second I breathe
for every stuff I buy
from safeway to target
all I say is one thing:
I should go get myself a helmet.


Sppriiing with a twist. -_-

Spring is here,
with lots of leaves,
and winds voice, I hear.

Green, green and green,
hot, hot and hot,
oh wow!
Thats defintely a green tea, you lot!





I'm very bored atm. Heh, thought I should compose something so, there you are, peeps. ;)
And yea, I'm really sorry for such lam-ee-ty and utter randomness. x)

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 07, 2010 11:22 am

*laughs* Oh these are awesome! Awesome Its such a relief to read something fresh and dissimilar to the usual poems that we read. Especially if they are humourous and light. Smile Whatsit about the helmet? Razz And the one about green tea was just as good. Tea rules!!! Worship

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 07, 2010 11:29 am

Rofl why thank you Big A! Helmet just came to mind all of a sudden. maybe because I suddenly thought of magpies. And magpies are vicious birds and you gotta wear a helmet when you're going to areas where magpies are dominating the place. Meh, I don't know. Randomeness, I think. XD

and green tea? Err... I don't really know. XD but thank youz! :D
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:08 pm

*cracks up* Magpies?!?! Oh thats priceless... Lmao

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:21 pm

Rofl oh yes. Magpies. XD luckily, I haven't been chased... XD
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:34 pm

WARNING: This will be blunt, I know it.



It hurts when I know I'm doing all I can for you,
but you don't seem to care.
It hurts when I'm expecting you to lift me up,
but what you do is dragging me to hell.

It hurts when I do something for you to smile at,
but you won't even appreciate it.
It hurts when I'm trying my best to hold on,
but I feel like I'm not important anymore.

It hurts when I know you're here,
but not really here.
Like a memory,
which just brings me to tears.


It hurts when I have this overwhelming emotions,
and I can't even explain why I am having them.
But one thing, I know I am true to my feelings.






SOrry, I had to release it or... :[


NOTE: I don't feel this anymore...


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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:12 pm

GG it is a good poem but the theme of it..... I really dont know what to say.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:21 pm

Well thanks, I guess... :[
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:56 am

Uh oh Shane and Janelle are having problems again. Gee Shane.


Anyway I liked it because it was super emotional. Keep up the good work girl.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:30 pm

Oh GG that was beautiful. It had so much emotion and truthfulness. It literally brought me to tears. And i disagree that was not blunt.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Sat Oct 23, 2010 5:08 am

*sighs* As just a reader, I'd say very well done, good poem, feelings were there as needed and all that. As a friend, I'd just get worried...

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:02 am

Thanks guys for all the feedbacks (though, I don't really care for them that much for I use this thread and write poems as a form of my release, etc.)...
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:46 am

Manhid

With what's left of me
has vanished into eternity

Mixed feelings that captivates, crave.
That hunger and desire for something.

Nothing as it may be,
for it's what's feeding me.


It speaks
Anger and hate consumes thee,
the extremity of thy revenge,
violent souls screaming for forgiveness,
left unseen by bare eyes love knows
nothing 'bout,
until it turns to ice.

For nothing as anger and hate,
can rock thy boat of solid pretense...


Confusion

Doubt and never trust one has given me,
for it is what thee thinks, I, deserves.

Lies! Such lies have given me nothing to
be as ecstatic as birds first day of flying...
For they don't worth a thousand golds...

Such quality that never satisfies this
little weak heart of mine,
for it is buried deep within the shadows of those two blackened eyes.

Night for it's as dark as thy soul.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Sun Dec 05, 2010 1:13 am

These are some well written poems and they all flow great. Keep up the good work GG.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Sun Dec 05, 2010 1:14 am

LOL Okay..well, thank you then. :]
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:13 pm

-Meh-

Strong, for its the thing that's needed.
I asked, but more so, pleaded.

Strenght is what I've got.
Body, mind and soul,
they sure deserve a satisfying rant.

A person, a certain person.
Someone who's willing to get me out of this prison.

WIshing, wishing..
wishing is all I can do.
Hope?
It'll mean more if I know I'm with you.

So now, please do.
I should admit, I need you.


Yea, well...did this just now. I'm kinda bored. :/
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Thu Jan 20, 2011 5:57 pm

Its not your best work, but I do still like it alot. Probably not the best though cause it seems almost like it was rushed a little.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Fri Jan 21, 2011 12:26 am

Yes, it was. I did it on the spot. I was kinda bored when I did that so, that's expected, really. But thanks for the feedback. :]
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:53 am

-Love for what it seems to be-

Love for what seems to be joyous,
so sweet as an apple,
with angels hanging in the trees,
playing harps for such momentous glory.

Love for what seems to be a temptation,
rose as it looks...
Cheery colored, soft, delicate...
thorns being ignored...
caused of mind blowing devilous sensations.

Love for what seems to be unmerciful,
throw stones for those who don't deserve it.

Love for what seems to be an endless abyss,
until vertigo swept over me.
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:06 am

I'm confused by what it means, but I like it...

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:11 am

I just wrote that to, you know, tell what I think love means, etc...
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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:14 am

Ah,well that makes it make a bit more sense. To me anyways.

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PostSubject: Re: I thought I'd share it here as well.   Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:23 am

LOL Well, thanks for your feedbacks, I guess. Laughing
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