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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Wed May 26, 2010 9:13 am

From start to finish I wonder why
The cuts look good in this messed up lie
The blood that trickles down my arm
People all stare at the guy who self-harms:-

"The emo" they call me
I turn to my name
They act out slicing their wrists
I hang my head in shame
I can't help my feelings
Of being alone
I hide myself for the day
Just longing to go home
I sprawl on my bed
With my razor in hand
And take myself away
To a much better land
I stare in the mirror
And let myself cry
Looking forward to the day
That I finally die
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Wed May 26, 2010 9:15 am

Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poison tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I don’t need you anymore…
Is what I think while tears pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.

Love is death and death is you;
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head
Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull…

...Now just a memory that’s faded and dull.
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Wed May 26, 2010 9:35 am

wow these are really dark. the sadness in them makes ur heart want to break. also the imagery so so stonger i can picture them happening.
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Thu May 27, 2010 4:33 am

purpl3sniper wrote:
They read in the papers and hear on the air
Of stealing and killing and crime everywhere
They sigh and say as they notice the trend,
'This young generation, when will it end? '
But can they be sure that it's our fault alone,
That apart of the problem they should claim as their own?
Are they less guilty who place in our way,
Objects and subjects that lead us astray?
Too much hating, not enough love
Maybe we should give peace a little shove
Too much money and too much idle time
Too many movies of passion and crime
Too many books not fit to be read
Too much evil in what we hear said
Too many children encouraged to roam
Too many parents who never stay home
We don't make the movies or publish the books
We don't paint mean pictures of gangstas and crooks
Drugs and alcohol, they trouble our brain
They're done by older folk who are greedy for gain
Delinquent teenagers, oh how you condemn
The sins of a nation and you blame it on them
By the laws of the blameless, the savior made known~
Who shall cast the first stone?
For in so many cases
It's sad but it's true
The title DELINQUENT fits older folk too

I applaud you dude! I love everything about this one. Yes, it is sort of dark but when you read it, you can see the hidden meanings! Like there are always hope about that certain something. Don't ask me what those some things are. I have lots in mind. =/ Dude, this is one of your best. Jeez..if I can rate this, no doubt tha you'll get an OUTSTANDING mark from me. Smile Very very nice. Well composed and... made me realize what is really happening to people, whether they are young or old.

purpl3sniper wrote:
From start to finish I wonder why
The cuts look good in this messed up lie
The blood that trickles down my arm
People all stare at the guy who self-harms:-

"The emo" they call me
I turn to my name
They act out slicing their wrists
I hang my head in shame
I can't help my feelings
Of being alone
I hide myself for the day
Just longing to go home
I sprawl on my bed
With my razor in hand
And take myself away
To a much better land
I stare in the mirror
And let myself cry
Looking forward to the day
That I finally die

*sighs* What do you want to hear from me exactly? Oh Alec... No

purpl3sniper wrote:
Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poison tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I don’t need you anymore…
Is what I think while tears pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.

Love is death and death is you;
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head
Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull…

...Now just a memory that’s faded and dull.
Again, I am asking, what do you want to hear or read from me? You know that writing poems are one way of expressing a person's feeling, yes? *takes deep breaths* For me not to spam this topic, overall, this is also a good poem. Imagery is really good, the rhythm (sp?) and how the words rhyme so, yeah. =)
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Thu May 27, 2010 8:36 am

This ones happier cause its gonna be given to my girlfriend.

Amazing and beautiful
not a flower or tree
Much prettier than that
and only I can see

Loving and caring
right down to the core
Filling me with happiness
and so much more

Eyes are so stunning
I can't look away
Gorgeous and shining
I'm here to stay

Here in your arms
is where I belong
The beating of your heart
is like a song
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Thu May 27, 2010 8:42 am

i think she will love that, i know i did.
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Thu May 27, 2010 8:47 am

Okay im going back to my real feelings.....


The lasting days
That I stay awake
With a strong urge
That makes me shake

The way I long
For the stinging
My blood to be drawn
Then left trickling

The lasting days
When I stay awake
With a strong urge
I cannot break

The urge can
Provide inspiration
Or ruin my plan
Leaving me in desperation

The lasting days
When I’m awake
With a strong urge
Where my world quakes

Is it the heat
Or is it me shaking
I just want some sleep
Where I won’t be waking

Because the lasting days
That leave me awake
With a strong urge
Unsure of what I can take
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Thu May 27, 2010 9:40 am

December 8
6:00 PM. It started to snow. The first snow of the season and the wife and I took our cocktails and sat for hours by the window watching the huge soft flakes drift down from heaven. It looked like a Grandma Moses Print. So romantic we felt like newlyweds again. I love snow!

December 9
We woke to a beautiful blanket of crystal white snow covering every inch of the landscape. What a fantastic sight! Can there be a more lovely place in the Whole World? Moving here was the best idea I've ever had. Shoveled for the first time in years and felt like a boy again. I did both our driveway and the sidewalks. This afternoon the snowplow came along and covered up the sidewalks and closed in the driveway, so I got to shovel again. What a perfect life.

December 12
The sun has melted all our lovely snow. Such a disappointment. My neighbor tells me not to worry, we'll definitely have a white Christmas. No snow on Christmas would be awful! Bob says we'll have so much snow by the end of winter, that I'll never want to see snow again. I don't think that's possible. Bob is such a nice man, I'm glad he's our neighbor.

December 14
Snow lovely snow! 8" last night. The temperature dropped to -20. The cold makes everything sparkle so. The wind took my breath away, but I warmed up by shoveling the driveway and sidewalks. This is the life!

The snowplow came back this afternoon and buried everything again. I didn't realize I would have to do quite this much shoveling, but I'll certainly get back in shape this way.

December 15
20 inches forecast. Sold my van and bought a 4x4 Blazer. Bought snow tires for the wife's car and 2 extra shovels. Stocked the freezer.

The wife wants a wood stove in case the electricity goes out. I think that's silly. We aren't in Alaska, after all.

December 16
Ice storm this morning. Fell on my butt on the ice in the driveway putting down salt. Hurt like heck. The wife laughed for one hour, which I think was very cruel.

December 17
Still way below freezing. Roads are too icy to go anywhere.

Electricity was off for 5 hours. I had to pile the blankets on to stay warm. Nothing to do but stare at the wife and try not to irritate her. Guess I should've bought a wood stove, but won't admit it to her. God I hate it when she's right. I can't believe I'm freezing to death in my own living room.

December 20
Electricity's back on, but had another 14" of the damn stuff last night. More shoveling. Took all day. Darn snowplow came by twice.

Tried to find a neighbor kid to shovel, but they said they're too busy playing hockey. I think they're lying. Called the only hardware store around to see about buying a snow blower and they're out. Might have another shipment in March. I think they're lying. Bob says I have to shovel or the city will have it done and bill me. I think he's lying.

December 22
Bob was right about a white Christmas because 13 more inches of the white crap fell today, and it's so cold it probably won't melt till August. Took me 45 minutes to get all dressed up to go out to shovel and then I had to poop. By the time I got undressed, pooped and dressed again, I was too tired to shovel. Tried to hire Bob who has a plow on his truck for the rest of the winter; but he says he's too busy. I think the jerk is lying.

December 23
Only 2" of snow today. And it warmed up to 0. The wife wanted me to decorate the front of the house this morning. What is she nuts!!! Why didn't she tell me to do that a month ago? She says she did but I think she's lying.

December 24
6". Snow packed so hard by snowplow, I broke the shovel. Thought I was having a heart attack. If I ever catch the man who drives that snowplow I'll drag him through the snow by his nose and beat him to death with my broken shovel. I know he hides around the corner and waits for me to finish shoveling and then he comes down the street at 100 miles an hour and throws snow all over where I've just been!

Tonight the wife wanted me to sing Christmas carols with her and open our presents, but I was too busy watching for the snowplow.

December 25
Merry -bleeping- Christmas! 20 more inches of the slop tonight. Snowed in. The idea of shoveling makes my blood boil. I hate the snow! Then the snowplow driver came by asking for a donation and I hit him over the head with my shovel. The wife says I have a bad attitude. I think she's a fricking idiot. If I have to watch "It's A Wonderful Life" one more time, I'm going to stuff her into the microwave.

December 26
Still snowed in. Why the heck did I ever move here? It was all HER idea. She's really getting on my nerves.

December 27
Temperature dropped to -30 and the pipes froze, plumber came after 14 hours of waiting for him, he only charged me $1400 to replace all my pipes.

December 28
Warmed up to above -20. Still snowed in. THE WITCH is driving me crazy!!!

December 29
10 more inches. Bob says I have to shovel the roof or it could cave in. That's the silliest thing I ever heard. How dumb does he think I am?

December 30
Roof caved in. I beat up the snow plow driver he is now suing me for a million dollars not only the beating I gave him but also for trying to shove the broken snow shovel up where the sun don't shine. The wife went home to her mother. 9" predicted.

December 31
I set fire to what's left of the house. No more shoveling.

January 8
Feel so good. I just love those little white pills they keep giving me. Why am I tied to the bed?
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Sat May 29, 2010 9:20 pm

O.o LOL, I liked the last one..January 8..it was funny....ok so about your poem....wow that was good...I liked the rhythm you had going there along with the rhyme I also think it flowed very nicely.
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:14 am

The first one, the poem that is dedicated to your gf, it is rather good. I think, like Sam said, she will love it. Very light to read but the message is there.

For the second one: -_________________-

For the last one, umm, are they all like diary entries?
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:00 am

My thoughts are jumbled, lost in a haze,
So I put this pen on the page and start the maze.
Winding through my mind to feel,
what is needed to help and kill.



This poem is done when my words are gone,
And my thoughts are as they belong.
Clear and steady and readable to me.
So that they can be hid from all to see.
These words show what I truly know,
And clear up the haze so it shows.
But when the maze is down and done,
my words dry up as is by the sun.
The thoughts are clear, no longer lost,
So these last words come at a cost.
I realize my fault and show my regret,
Wishing I could travel and hit reset,
But the past is gone, and we are here,
All we can do is look forward with fear.
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:01 am

I know what you did to me,
you fucked me up real bad.
so open your eyes so you can see,
you screwed me up, your all i had.

so now i wander, lonely and cold,
i tie the noose around my throat.
my life is ending, my soul is sold.
im leaving now, and heres my note.
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:27 am

I'm fighting a losing battle
But I'll fight it anyway
And I will keep on fighting
Until my dying day
And I will fall
I'll close my eyes
A prayer softly say
Stare blankly at the
Gash on my arm
And watch the blood
Trickle away
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PostSubject: Re: Purples poems   Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:49 am

purpl3sniper wrote:
My thoughts are jumbled, lost in a haze,
So I put this pen on the page and start the maze.
Winding through my mind to feel,
what is needed to help and kill.


This poem is done when my words are gone,
And my thoughts are as they belong.
Clear and steady and readable to me.
So that they can be hid from all to see.
These words show what I truly know,
And clear up the haze so it shows.
But when the maze is down and done,
my words dry up as is by the sun.
The thoughts are clear, no longer lost,
So these last words come at a cost.
I realize my fault and show my regret,
Wishing I could travel and hit reset,
But the past is gone, and we are here,
All we can do is look forward with fear.

Nice. Very nice poem you composed here Alec... like it! Smile

purpl3sniper wrote:
I know what you did to me,
you fucked me up real bad.
so open your eyes so you can see,
you screwed me up, your all i had.

so now i wander, lonely and cold,
i tie the noose around my throat.
my life is ending, my soul is sold.
im leaving now, and heres my note.

purpl3sniper wrote:
I'm fighting a losing battle
But I'll fight it anyway
And I will keep on fighting
Until my dying day
And I will fall
I'll close my eyes
A prayer softly say
Stare blankly at the
Gash on my arm
And watch the blood
Trickle away
>.> DUnno what to say... All I know is that, these two are both emo's and kinda let me know that the poet who wrote these are....... *sighs*
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