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PostSubject: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat May 22, 2010 6:36 pm

The loss of My Friend
What is the meaning of a friend?
Is he the person who makes you laugh?
Is he the person whom you can talk to when times are tough?
Is he the person who is always there for you in the end?

Once upon a time I thought I knew
what a friend means to me.
But in the end the only thing I know
is that I was so naive.

Once upon a time I had a friend
who laughed with and comforted me.
But little did I know was that I was being used
for his own selfish needs.

Then one day some kids come
and challenge my friend to a fight.
He tried his best but lost,
and did not wake until the night after the fight.

One day after that
came an argument to make me sad.
We argued over the correct way to become stronger
and he said 'Enough of you I've had".

And so we fought.
To prove who was right we sought.
In the end I fell to the dirt,
unaware I was in for more hurt.

When I woke I found,
the person whom I thought
to be a friend of mine,
had joined a gang of thugs all around.

And when I found that
he had done so,
we fought again, and he showed
that superior to me he was so.

After that I made a solemn vow
to save my friend no matter how.
So after I regained conscious,
a fight in 3 years I promised:
That is I win he leaves
the gang that I loathed so passionately.

And so he agreed
with the condition that
should I lose
to my side he shall never come back.

So came 3 years of hard training
for saving my friend,maybe.
But despite my training,
I could not defeat him,nor could he defeat me.

He left the gang but vowed
to never befriend me no how.
And so now I mourn for,but do not hate
the loss of my friend on this day. Crying or Very sad

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The Important Things in Life

What are the important things in life
that make one able to weather all strife?
What is the secret to success
that few people seem to understand?

Well one can say that hard work will bring success
and they would be right,
but does success equal happiness?
Not always,not during strife.

One simple thing is family,
another would be friends,
the people who stay with you no matter what
until one reaches the end.

But they alone cannot help
with the one thing you must do yourself.
One must conquer the demon of doubt
which often comes about.

How must one defeat
the demon of doubt?
How one achieves victory
is to remain stout.
So when doubt comes your way,
confidence can blow it away.

So people you love are the first important thing in life,
the second one is confidence.
But these two alone
cannot help you stay strong
without the third and final element,
the third of the trio to success.

So what is this miraculous third
that everyone has heard
but has not applied
making their efforts a lie?

The third is judgement
though not to judge others.
So what do I mean by judgement
if one cannot judge others?

Judgement is the ability to gauge
what one must do and say
in order to ensure
nothing wrong is procured.

Judgement is the element of weighing options
and picking the best one
so one does not do foolish deeds
because they want to be stubborn.

So the important things in life
are not money, fees and college degrees
but they are the elements three
of love,confidence and judgement.

Love gives on the confidence
to make a good judgement.
So do you see how these elements three
tie one into another
to bring success and victory in life?

Love,the most important
since it is the foundation.
Confidence the strong pillar.
Judgement,the pillar that can only be achieved through logic.

Since money,fees,and college degrees
are useless without the pillars three
to support them,
there are only three important things in life
that makes everything else fall into place
and can weather all strife,
giving one peace.

The important things in life,
the ultimate needs of spirit and mind are:
LOVE,CONFIDENCE,and JUDGEMENT
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Hope for a Dark Life

Oh once how I would lie in my Bed!
Not understanding,always asking," Why does my heart feels Dead?"
But then I realized," I forgot what life could give
if I but allow love to live in my heart."

Oh how I realized I hurt the ones I Love!
Because I could not give Up
the bitterness of my Heart,
he one an old friend tore apart.

So how did I relieve
myself of this pain
I learned to accept
in this game called Life?

The answer I have is thus,
"In life one must never give up,
for sometimes a curse that makes you cry
can be a blessing in disguise,
if you have the wisdom to open your eyes."

If one can experience grief,
why cannot one feel Relief?
All you must do
is pray to the one who made you.

If you accept this fact,
pretty soon you make a pact
to see the good in life.
When you can laugh at your strifes.

So my message is thus:
"If you trust in love,
eventually you shall find
Hope in a Dark Life."
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Lonely or Loved?

Here stands a young man at home.
There stands an old man all alone.
While the youth has family,
the Elder has no one really.

Why must the Elder stand alone
while the youth uses his phone
to call his family?

The answer is very simple:
While the youth embraced life with love,
the Elder learned nothing but hate
at the hands of fate.

The Elder grew scared of the world
while the youth stood up to the world.

The Elder allowed hate to fester in his heart
when he had the power to stop it with love.

The youth chose to love even when he felt powerless
while the Elder used power to spread hate.

So what must happen when two opposites disagree
And one side does not wish for Peace?
Well a terrible contest it turned out to be,
but the youth achieved victory
due to the power of the creator.

So the moral is thus:
Either love and have others love you
or suffer the fate of the outcast.

So life is a matter choice.
Which one will you make?
Because in the end you shall be,by your choices,
Lonely or Loved.

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The Outcast

Oh,how I sat at school,
Alone because I was uncool.
Oh how I wished
Someone would be my friend
So my loneliness would end.

Oh why did everyone
Treat me as scum?!
Oh true,the answer is simple
yet tough to live with.
I was a weakling who only cared to impress others,
Allowing others to walk over me,making myself unfree to act individually.

So what,oh what,is the cure
For this attention seeking of most severe?
The answer is simple,yet tough.
The answer is love.
For as you will see,
Some people are not for you or me.

If you seek friends without your morals,
You are always doomed to squabble.
So my advice is thus:
Finding friends who think like you,you must.

If one stays true to themself,
others cannot but help
to respect you for who you are,
allowing you to soar far.
Then comes the quest
To find the best
friend who respects who you are,
and who is not far from your heart for life.

If one follows this advice,
you can end all strife,
the strife of your identity.
Only then can you end,
the life and misery of
The Outcast.
Then comes the last battle:
Will your friend stay with you through any struggle?
If they do then you have
managed to defeat living as
The Outcast.

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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat May 29, 2010 9:25 pm

Oh...think Im going to cry. Sad That was sad JoM... but it was great. You had feeling in that poem... a little of rhyme in there which I enjoyed a lot.... 5 stars.
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat May 29, 2010 9:35 pm

Thanks CC.I wrote this poem the day I fought my best friend,so the emotion was authentic.
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat May 29, 2010 9:41 pm

Yes thats what I mean. The feeling was great you grasped it....it was what made the poem good to read..
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:06 am

*sighs* All I can say is that, you've done it well.. Nice theme and everything dude... keep writing..Btw, why don't you post your other poems here as well?
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:17 am

I have added the poems I wrote on IF,so feel free to comment on those too.
Also,you can expect a new poem from me once a week at least now that I am no longer in school.The next one will be posted on 6-26-10.Enjoy.
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:56 am

Hmm, these are unusual set of poems that you've got here JoM. They are very straightforwardly written, and the messages you give in each are clear. The poems almost seem like short stories. The description is good in each of them. You've got your own style of writing, which is great, so keep up at it...

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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Sat Jun 19, 2010 3:00 am

Thanks Artrain.GG used to say the same things.I really appreciate it.
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:40 pm

This one was kinda rushed, so it is probably low qualitybut here is another poem from me anyways:

The Light in the Darkness

Have you ever had a time
when hope felt out of reach?
Have you ever felt like
you are somene who is weak?

Has there ever been a moment
when life seemed bleak,
and when trying to be the optimist
you felt soooooooo nieve?

When life has you down,
are you just gonna frown?
Or will you get off your ass
and show how your strength of will is grand?

Whenever there is darkness,
to vanquish it you need
but to switch the light on
to make everything shine.

Just as light shines in the darkness,
so too does hope shine,
if you show the will
to never give to hopelessness.

So even though your lover has lost contact with you,
they still love you, you know this to be true.
So as long as they do not deny you,
to them you stay true.

For when you lose contact with a lover,
never stop, no matter how you suffer.
For in the darkness of the unknown,
the light of love shall protect you.
Now I say these lines:
The darkness of hate and unknown
can be defeated by the light of faith an love.
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PostSubject: Re: Judge of my Magical Poetry   Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:37 am

*pats JoM on teh back* Very well done dood! Even if it might have been done in haste, it was not in the least bit of any low quality. In fact, it seemed to be one of your best writings. Enjoyed reading it, and a good way you've put your thoughts in. Keep up...

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