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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:07 am

same for mr but ur poems come to mind alot quicker then mine
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:59 pm

>_>

Nice poem, Demolisher. I liked your word choice for this piece.
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:22 pm

Thanks Fallen Angel, I kinda like it too when I look back and read it.
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:21 pm

Very nice Kieth I like how you kept repeating the dark is coming it's sounds like a real poem good work!
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:23 pm

Are you saying that none of my poems are real poems? Any poem that one comes up with is a real poem.
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Wed Mar 23, 2011 9:20 am

I think what DD is saying is that some poetry that people can make can sound false and fake. And he's saying that that isn't the case with yours. I think.

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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:40 am

This poem is one that Shane and I came up with together, alternating every other verse I believe.

Fight of the shadows

Shane: into the darkness we march
Keith: the hidden shadows to end
Shane: and into the light the men
Keith: the side of light and the side of shadow
Shane: where the land was split and rent
Keith: and the fires and rains come forth
Shane: unto those unworthy of entrance
Keith: the men they lined, the shadows they judged
Shane: and the light sat and waited
Keith: while the shades the would be baited
Shane: and the men waited and waited
Keith: for the shadow's first move
Shane: would be to draw steel
Keith: but no steel was drawn
Shane: for this was when the light
Keith: did not need weapons of steel
Shane: but rather would use
Keith: the powers given to them
Shane: that were bestowed by the One
Keith: the leader of old
Shane: who was most powerful
Keith: in both the light and the dark
Shane: and felt towards those in need
Keith: but when the dark made its move
Shane: the light was caught off guard
Keith: but two strong heroes
Shane: were swift in action and strong in heart
Keith: with light as their guide, and bonds deeper than brothers
Shane: the two were joined by another
Keith: the third was turned from dark
Shane: by one of the brothers bold
Keith: the youngest of the three, C he be
Shane: while the other light man, w, was the middle and
Keith: t the newest of the three fighting together against the dark
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Shane: was strong in body
Keith: and strong in mind
Shane: and thus the three stood their ground
Keith: against so many that opposed
Shane: yet they never waivered, they never left their post
Keith: felling many foes
Shane: with blade and might
Keith: with mind and light
Shane: the trio fought and in eventually
Keith: losing only the leader
Shane: they managed to destroy the shadows facing the humans
Keith: allowing the light, to shine through ruling the world once more
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:52 am

LOL Yah. Like I said in the thread, verrryyy good poem. Love it. :D
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:55 am

I still can't believe we came up with that. I think we should work together more often, Keith.

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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:23 am

As I already said on your thread, yea we should lol.
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Apr 01, 2011 5:03 pm

That was quite a good poem. Wonder what else you 2 could come up with.

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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:30 pm

Well, you'll see pretty soon. The next time we both have time to chat with each other (which is like everyday anymore, more or less), I'm gonna make sure we start, if not make, another one. Minimum.

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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Sat Apr 02, 2011 8:48 am

Shane its not like I can just tell a poem to come to me, each line just did once I saw the line you put. So dont go saying that you are gonna make sure it happens when thats really not possible to make sure of.
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PostSubject: Re: keiths poems   Mon May 30, 2011 11:12 pm

Wow nice poem guys the way its worded u can picture it all kinda or that's just me lol.
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