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PostSubject: A preview of my story :O   Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:06 pm

Alright :O this is a preview of the first book im writing (its gonna be a trilogy :D) The basic concept is a virus starts spreading all over the internet and messing with day to day things (like message boards, games and shopping sites). After awhile cryptic messages start to appear and disturbances with machinery begin to take place. After a year or so of these events take place, what appears to be a tear in space forms in the center of (insert city name here, haven't thought of it) and a great beast (the virus) starts to destroy the city. From that point on the virus was called the Nostradamus virus. Well theres the basic outline of the first book, without all the twists and good stuff :X but here's a little more in depth look at the first few chapters :D

(ch. 1)
The story starts along the lines of a normal day in the virtual reality game of
Sairaus. Rumors had been spreading of glitches in the game. Odd monsters from OTHER
games appearing. Dismissing the rumors, the guild Niku Manjuu goes out for a normal day
of questing and messing around, though near the end of the day the guild heads to the
'Village of Toads'.(end ch. 1)

(interlude starts)
In the real world, several emergency alerts pop up in the administration section of
Sairaus's screens. The game is being invaded by something. Administrators are
contacting GameMasters, the guild incharge of keeping the game running(player wise),
and having them rush to the site.(end interlude)

(ch. 2)
Continuing where ch. 1 left off, ch.2 picks up as the members of Niku Manjuu are
entering a portal for a Guild Quest.While in the quest random issues that can be passed
of as the server being stressed (as its evening it happens often), such as lag spikes
and loot lags. Near the end of the guild quest the issues slowly stabalize and
dissapear. As the guild enters the boss room, they find not the normal boss, but a
Trojan virus that has manifested into the game.(NOTE: Trojans are somewhat small
viruses but they reproduce like crazy and the only way to get rid of a trojan is to
take out the source...or so i think :x)(end ch. 2)
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PostSubject: Re: A preview of my story :O   Tue Jun 29, 2010 4:46 pm

Looks good so far, I think.

I think I'll enjoy reading what you come up with.

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PostSubject: Re: A preview of my story :O   Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:21 pm

Agreed...I never heard of a story like that :D
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