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Twin Dagger
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Sat May 15, 2010 8:33 am

These poems are really good Den. I cant wait until the updates.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Sat May 15, 2010 8:33 am

The member 'Keith' has done the following action : Dices roll

#1 'Lady Luck' : 5, 4, 1, 1, 3, 3, 5, 3, 1, 2, 6, 2, 1, 3, 1, 5, 5, 6, 1, 5, 1, 5, 1, 1, 1, 6, 6, 6, 6, 2, 5, 5, 5, 6, 5, 2, 2, 4, 4, 3, 6, 3, 5, 1, 6, 6, 6, 5, 5, 6, 3, 5, 5, 3, 6, 5, 3, 5, 5, 3, 1, 3, 1, 5, 3, 6, 1, 4, 4, 4, 1, 4, 1, 5, 4, 6, 4, 3, 5, 3, 3, 1, 2, 1, 4, 1, 6, 1, 6, 4, 3, 6, 1, 4, 5, 3, 4, 5, 1, 2

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#2 'Lord Chance' : 3, 2, 5, 3, 6, 3, 3, 4, 5, 2

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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Fri May 21, 2010 4:40 am

My Oath

I make you a promise
An oath
A vow

I will follow you forever plus one hour
then an hour more
You will never walk alone
I will be behind you
at your side
and in your heart forever

I will follow until I am too tired to move
And then I'll walk one more mile
I will shelter you from the searing wind until I'm raw
Then I'll shelter you from the freezing rain

I will love you until my heart breaks
Because I can love you no more
I will be your rock of ages
Always at your side

Because to me you are worth the weight of the earth in gold
You know me as no one else does
You love me as no one else will
You are MY rock of ages

You were worried you would be the fruit no one buys
I would pay with all I have for you
You say men are fools and not worth your time
Let me be the exception to the rule

Love me as I have always loved you
And you will never need to walk alone

This is my Promise
My Oath
My Vow

I will Follow
Shelter
Love
And Need you forever

This I swear.

I love you.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Fri May 21, 2010 3:15 pm

Den that is amazing. Is there really someone that you feel that strongly about?
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Fri May 21, 2010 3:19 pm

Actually yes. There really is. Smile Hopefully the opportunity will come and I shall woo her... or maybe not... Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Sat May 22, 2010 1:26 am

lol! What can I say? Keith said it it all for me? You're inspired eh? WOW!! As always, awesome dude. The feeling is there. Now, if this girl only knew about this poem...., *winks* xD
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Mon May 24, 2010 5:38 am

Question

Ever wondered where I was?
I'm right here by your side
As I have always been
As I always will be

Ever wished I was with you?
I am and always will be
Perhaps not literally
But my heart will always find it's way to yours

Ever wanted me to hold you?
I always will and always want to
Whether my arms are around you
Or my heart with yours

Ever wanted me to leave you?
Because I would were you to ask
If it were for your happiness
Mine would take a back seat.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Mon May 24, 2010 5:51 am

O.o I'm..... silent I don't really know what to say. JUst...just keep writing dude... xD
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Tue May 25, 2010 6:47 am

Song

I sing
I sing because otherwise
I cry
And that would be too much to bear

I sing
I sing away my sorrow
I harmonise
Harmonise with my pain

I sing
I sing even though it hurts
It hurts
And I sing through it all

I sing
Of you and me and us
I weep
I weep over all you stole from me

I sing
Because it is the last thing I have left
I sing
In defiance to you

Because while I sing
My head is high
My Life is aching
My heart breaking

I sing
Because other wise
I cry
And I don't want to give you the pleasure
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Tue May 25, 2010 6:56 am

O.o Dude......that was.... sad! Sad Very well-written. The emotion was there. Reminded me of times when music was the only thing that kinda kept me holding onto something. O.o A very sad, deep and one of your best. I love the simple approach because that's what made it unique and very understandable. Well-done!
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Tue May 25, 2010 8:34 am

That makes me want to cry...Very powerful Den....

As with Janelle, it reminds me of times when only music could keep me in faith...

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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Thu Jun 24, 2010 5:30 pm

Sense

I hear you
Breathing next to me
Whispering encouragement
Walking with me always

I see you
The movement of your chest at night
The way your eyes catch the light
The twists and curves of you

I smell you
The scent of a summer's day
The smell of flowers
The smell of love and security

I taste you
The cherry on your lips
The sweet taste of your love
The warm taste of your presence

I feel you
The subtle change as you step behind me
The soft velvet of your skin
the silky smoothness of your hair

I know you
In all the small things
In all the big things

I know you
In everything.

Yaaay! we has update! woopwoop!
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by me...   Thu Jun 24, 2010 5:47 pm

O.o

Well, finally. I've been waiting (JK). Razz

Let's see...

The set up is nice. It flows well over the tongue....

I get a decent amount of meaning from it, the imagery more than anything. I mean, it's really nicely put. Very well expressed.

However, that last 2 lines...for some reason they just seem really lonely and out of place there by themselves....I mean, they make sense to be set apart and all, but for some reason I just think they look odd just sitting there...

Meh, whatever. Still a nice poem Den.

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