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PostSubject: Re: Heartless   Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:09 am

Thought I'd share a critique I got on IF:
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Go here to see it: (It's the second post in the thread, the one after the story. I'd look at this instead of reading my quote above)
http://www.inheritanceforums.com/index.php?showtopic=66618&st=0&gopid=1951883&#entry1951883

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PostSubject: Re: Heartless   Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:36 am

Ooppsss.. I forgot to tell you that. I've seen it already. ;P
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PostSubject: Re: Heartless   Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:57 am

tongue

I was looking over there to see if anyone had posted in my topic for this story, but I couldn't find the story for like ever.

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PostSubject: Re: Heartless   Thu Feb 10, 2011 1:41 am

*shudders*

'nuff said Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Heartless   Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:29 am

*laughs*

I'm glad to hear that.

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