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PostSubject: Works by me   Fri Apr 22, 2011 12:34 pm

the darkness inside

I’m hiding in the night
Keeping out of sight
Not sure which way is right

I’ve seen the end begun
Unto the burning sun
I’ve seen oblivion

Now trying to turn back
I’ll launch my attack
Somehow I’ve lost my track
Now I’m trying to turn back

Sometimes its hard to see
What could this darkness be
Someday soon you will see
The darkness inside me

Back into the light
I’ll watch day rise from night
But still I hide in fright

‘cause now the pain will start
The pain inside my heart
Will tear this world apart

Watching the end begun
Unto the burning sun
I’ll watch oblivion

Somehow I can’t turn back
The world under attack
Forever lost off track
Nowhere left to turn back

Forever on the run
We’ll see the end begun
We’ll watch the dying sun
In the shadow of the one

I hope no one can see
This darkness trapped in me
I’ll stare on hopelessly
‘cause of this darkness inside me
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PostSubject: Re: Works by me   Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:33 am

I thought this was really good, Lexie. A bit short, since I don't know how you would have it sung or when there would be breaks for music and what music you'd use and all that. So I can't comment there.

But still good. A definite meaning behind it, I like it.

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PostSubject: Re: Works by me   Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:56 pm

Very good song. would love to see what it sounds like if it had music to it. Once again good song.
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